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Score: 4
Lightning

"Needs more time and work"

submission: Lightning
date: October 13, 2008

Sry, but right now, your work seems incomplete. IF u were just to polish up the animation and possibly chose a background music that better matches the feel ur trying to convey. For the music, I recomend none other than newgrounds. We often forget we have a free music library availible to us to use, so just use some more appropriate music for the flash and sharpen up the animation and this will turn out better.

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Score: 9
ParodyRangersTheMovie 1-1

"Still, at its core, Parody Rangers"

date: October 3, 2008

I've been watching on how ppl here keep giving this movie a bad rap because its random and Awesome ripoff, but I believe they are sorely mistaken. The awesome series randomness is..well..more random. This series has random moments, but still does wht it has always done, parody the Power Rangers, which is something alot of kids on here really dont remember. Most kids on Newgrounds have only seen the thousands of iterations that followed Power Rangers, not the original one. I remember bieng a kid and watching the original Power Rangers and thats why I prolly find these Parody Rangers movies more funny, because they actually relate to me more than it does u other ppl, who r prolly just laughing at the random humor.

Good job Kirbopher, for keeping a shitty part of both our childhoods alive, by this awesome series. 4/5 9/10

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Score: 7
Pokemon LAANP Ep2 Part2

"Really Good"

date: June 13, 2008

Very creative and original. Animation could've been a lil bit better, and it was too short. But otherwise, gj. Keep up the good work.

June 13, 2008

Author's Response:

thanks ;D

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Score: 6
DontForgetToRunMeOver Ep1

"Not Bad"

date: June 11, 2008

Pretty good and funny. The only thing I would suggest is tht you fix the audio or get better recording devices. Other than tht, gj.

June 11, 2008

Author's Response:

Will do, and probably re-upload. But until then, I only have a laptop mic.

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Score: 7
F&P - My Very First Flash

"Grade B work"

date: June 2, 2008

I liked it alot, it had what alot of flashes today are missing, tht bieng a good plot, a some well placed jokes. Only bad part is the graphics and animations ere kinda mediocre. I think if u put more time in the graphics, it would've been a perfect ten. Tht and some slightly better voice action. Other than tht, good wrk. 7/10

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Score: 8
More Brawl Taunts

"Very Nice and I understand"

submission: More Brawl Taunts
date: June 1, 2008

I have to agree with you on wht u said on your podcast. It is kinda sad that the one you made for a joke got so much recognition. I mean its still on the front page, even now. Im sure this will be a great bit to discuss in your ne xt podcast, which im looking very foward to.

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Score: 8
>>my first flash<<

"Pretty Good"

submission: >>my first flash<<
date: May 25, 2008

Not bad at all, I give it a 8/10 mostly due to the fact that it could use a bit more color and the explosion effect at the end. And u should've at least came up with the something for the title, anything would've been okay. Good worh though.

May 26, 2008

Author's Response:

i used >> and <<. ;)

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Score: 4
Kill Boe 2

"Okay"

submission: Kill Boe 2
date: May 18, 2008

The death's were kinda funny, but the animation was lackling a bit. Not much else to say, not really that good nor bad.

May 18, 2008

Author's Response:

The animation stlye was made to be simplistic.
If you watch the first (which I wouldn't recommend. haha)
The animation was rather basic.
I wanted it to be all new to the original, while still holding somewhat true to it.
I feel comfortable with this style, and enjoyed doing it.

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Score: 6
Road trippin'

"Okay, but too literal"

submission: Road trippin'
date: May 12, 2008

I agree with boundless, i think it was to literal. What he means by that is that what the lyrics say, does mean u literally do them in the music video. Their just representations of something else. Actually taking them literally is just a bit strange.

Aside from that, the style was smooth, abeit at simple. Good kob, with more practice, im sure you could much better next time.

Nothing front page worthy, but still a decent flash 6/10

May 12, 2008

Author's Response:

Yeah, I'm gonna choose a less deep song next time :)
Or, don't take it too literal

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Score: 9
Biology vs. Chemistry

"Nice One"

date: May 10, 2008

Nice job. It's flashes like this which should end up on the front page, mostly due to your originality. Animation pretty good, voice acting and sound could use a tenny bit of work, but overall: Great Flash 9/10

May 12, 2008

Author's Response:

Too bad its not on the frontpage T.T
Oh well! 3rd daily is good enuff!!
Thx!

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